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I cannot see anybody in the total darkness
and if dying is much better.
But this is a temporary loss of consciousness.
Their screams faintly I hear.
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Astutely expressed....well orchestrated language, here, Nimal....Inventively amusing, as it touches h' darkside, amusingly...; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; FJR
A bit lighthearted and amusing. Also a bit sad to wake up and have to face the reality once again. There is wisdom in your poem as well as wit. Warm regards, Sandra
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1/14/2026 2:48:44 PM # 1.0.0
The feeling comes through with this piece Nimal and you have the abillity to merge and display many styles Thankyou Love duncan X