Blah-Ness. Poem by Ballerina With Fins

Blah-Ness.

Rating: 5.0


Blah-ness. Words dripping
drip drip
dripping like sodden clothes
Thoughts sinking
sink sink
sinking like fallen bodies
Mind failing
fail fail
failing in the slough of despond
bodies turning Blah
Blah blah blah
failing
dripping
sinking turning
falling

into total
Blah-ness.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 31 August 2006

Yes, very interesting contemporary poem--I like it--Melvina

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William Jackson 13 May 2006

Great use of alliteration. Witty and thought provoking. Good poem. It artistically paints a picture of some of the blah poems I write that no one on earth ever reads, truly bad works that exist only long enough for me to hit the delet button.

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