Blazing Suns Once Blackened Me Poem by Rani Turton

Blazing Suns Once Blackened Me

Rating: 5.0


Blazing suns once blackened me
My soul was bright
I watched the moon dancing
With the clouds at night

Cold winter wind bleached me
That was my misery
My soul became dark
A sad lonely destiny

I whispered and moaned
My life seemed thus sealed
My mind fled thither
Into wounds never healed

Copyright 2008 Rani Turton

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Balch 12 October 2008

Deep meaningful, can mean whatever the reader wants black/white, good/bad.10+ regards Tom I loved it.

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Ruth Walters 21 May 2009

Oh yes I am with you here....come and read my poem 'A Splintered Soul' Ruthy

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Yelena M. 17 April 2009

An inspiring and original title and wonderful emotions exposed from very deep within..Thanks for sharing, Rani. Best wishes. A.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 October 2008

Beautiful and touchy. 10+

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Bob Blackwell 25 October 2008

Sad but beautiful, you write from a special place. Bob

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Ron Flowers 13 October 2008

Beautifully written, Rani. Also, have been enjoying your website. Ron

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