Blazing Suns Once Blackened Me Poem by Rani Turton

Blazing Suns Once Blackened Me

Rating: 5.0


Blazing suns once blackened me
My soul was bright
I watched the moon dancing
With the clouds at night

Cold winter wind bleached me
That was my misery
My soul became dark
A sad lonely destiny

I whispered and moaned
My life seemed thus sealed
My mind fled thither
Into wounds never healed

Copyright 2008 Rani Turton

Sunday, October 12, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: destiny,wounds
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Balch 12 October 2008

Deep meaningful, can mean whatever the reader wants black/white, good/bad.10+ regards Tom I loved it.

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Ruth Walters 21 May 2009

Oh yes I am with you here....come and read my poem 'A Splintered Soul' Ruthy

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Yelena M. 17 April 2009

An inspiring and original title and wonderful emotions exposed from very deep within..Thanks for sharing, Rani. Best wishes. A.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 October 2008

Beautiful and touchy. 10+

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Bob Blackwell 25 October 2008

Sad but beautiful, you write from a special place. Bob

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Ron Flowers 13 October 2008

Beautifully written, Rani. Also, have been enjoying your website. Ron

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