Bless Me Please... Poem by hazem al jaber

Bless Me Please...

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Bless me please...







confused i am...

confused matter that which i feel about you..

on fires i live...

fires eats inside all of me...

have no dare to ask with about you...

have no trick in, to call you...

have no choice to stop thinking about you...

want to put out the flame which eating me inside...

want to know...

want to be certain from your feelings about me...

i can read your feelings so well..

i know and feel however i looked into your charming eyes...

but in a same time...

i don`t want to be so hurry to your heart..

won`t be a curious person...

won`t be disappointed...

just want to hear it clearly from you..

come out from your lips directly from the heart..

the heart which made from me a lover..

the lover of you...

would you please bless me...

and make me happy to hear that which i always dream about..

that word which means a lot to me and to my life...

would you please...

waiting and will keep wait, till you bless me..



by: hazem02@yahoo.com

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bright Rose 19 May 2009

I really loved your poem, you managed to deliver your reader the feeling of confusion you are in, nice description of your inner manifestation that was shown on your surface behavior, typical behavior if I didn’t call it a universal one, nice job in this poem, very well written and very powerful, your tone again is so convincing. So creative

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Lynda Robson 16 February 2009

I hope you will be blessed with love, nice poem Hazem, 10 Lynda xx

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