hazem al jaber

Rookie - 9 Points (21 may 1965 / kuwait)

A Silent Pains - Poem by hazem al jaber

still nothing, just a silent pains...
which moan alone...
and fight for her freedom..
to live in deep...
no one knows her deeply disaster..

she hids her repressed sadness,
which lived with a most of her life..

don`t allow any, crossing her darkness world..
her darkness world, is a mix between a sadness tears
and an imprisoned breaths...

so she is coexistence with her life,
until to declare her ending..

Comments about A Silent Pains by hazem al jaber

  • Unwritten Soul (3/28/2012 8:03:00 AM)

    The poem written with crimson blood, so pain and so hurt....literally and heartfelt...That's mean you have power in your hand that make your poem so real for readers...anyway i wish all the best for her for one day she will find the glory day and win over sadness..peace! Salam_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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  • (9/24/2009 1:27:00 PM)

    a typical poem to describe how our pains are incarcerated within our hearts..it does not take us much time to express our emotions provided we dropp our shyness or ego or anything that stops us. (Report) Reply

  • (8/16/2009 4:43:00 AM)

    Silent pains lead to rage and depression, it's better to express them in any way or another. Sport is one outlet, poetry is another. Both serve to release the pain and calm the beating heart... I invite you to read 'A poetess wrath', you'll see how a woman releases her pain and her rage. Good write. (Report) Reply

  • (6/16/2009 2:14:00 AM)

    there are pains that are better kept sient, without knowing what it is, i feel the pain too.this is the best way it can be expressed, the massage is great! (Report) Reply

  • (4/25/2009 7:06:00 AM)

    There's a great message behind this poem.. i enjoyed reading it very much. great work! (Report) Reply

  • (3/5/2009 5:16:00 AM)

    Nicely writen, nice to read. well done (Report) Reply

  • (1/6/2009 6:49:00 AM)

    WoW beautiful exepresion enhancing with honestly feeling and that is the main needing in the safe world
    with my best wishing
    Laila Lili
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  • (12/12/2008 11:37:00 AM)

    Very matured stroke by pen
    beautifully constructed
    keep going
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  • (10/18/2008 2:23:00 AM)

    i can sense your silent pains
    it touched me a great deal
    thanks for sharing this lovely piece
    love anju
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/13/2008 2:43:00 AM)

    Intensive silent pain, well composed poem. (Report) Reply

  • (10/9/2007 4:37:00 AM)

    Silent pains can drive a person to suffer intense self-pity and sorrow. Most people experience such agony, why can't we express and not keep the pain to ourselves to let it go to make it ease out from within. Sad but true that we can't let go of the silent pains. Good write, I can realte to it. Top mark. (Report) Reply

  • Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele (7/22/2007 10:37:00 PM)

    hazem -

    so intense...such misery you find in the silence, the dark.
    I see another world in my, 'Be Quiet Please.' Tell me if you like it.

    Best wishes - Cheryl
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  • Anabel just Anabel (3/8/2007 9:54:00 AM)

    wonderful! ! really beautiful! ! ! deep and intense! ! love it! ! (Report) Reply

  • (2/8/2007 12:58:00 PM)

    heeey i love it
    btw i really like the way u write
    i like your style alooot
    and good luck in life
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  • (2/4/2007 1:20:00 PM)

    deep, intense, i reallyliked this one. its message was moving. good work (Report) Reply

  • (12/10/2006 9:47:00 AM)

    Hi, I have no words to describe. It's simply wonderful. My heart cries. (Report) Reply

  • (5/21/2006 1:46:00 PM)

    i love this poem
    sort of reminds me of well....me
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  • (1/3/2006 5:22:00 AM)

    i love your poems it full of emotion and readers can relate on it. i like this Silent Pains because i saw alot of housewives being in that situation and i'm one of them.
    you've got a 10 from me.

    P.S. I'm not an arab.
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  • (12/26/2005 10:34:00 AM)

    Touches me. -
    Regards, Nibedita.
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  • (11/7/2005 2:36:00 AM)

    This is a nice Poem. I give all my pain to my God. However, I keep all my pain Inside me. I can understand this poem. Nice Job. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 8, 2005

Poem Edited: Friday, May 21, 2010

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