A Silent Pains

Rating: 3.1
still nothing, just a silent pains...
which moan alone...
and fight for her freedom..
to live in deep...
no one knows her deeply disaster..

she hids her repressed sadness,
which lived with a most of her life..

don`t allow any, crossing her darkness world..
her darkness world, is a mix between a sadness tears
and an imprisoned breaths...

so she is coexistence with her life,
until to declare her ending..
Thursday, September 8, 2005
Unwritten Soul 28 March 2012
The poem written with crimson blood, so pain and so hurt....literally and heartfelt...That's mean you have power in your hand that make your poem so real for readers...anyway i wish all the best for her for one day she will find the glory day and win over sadness..peace! Salam_Unwritten Soul
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Nithya Raghavan 24 September 2009
a typical poem to describe how our pains are incarcerated within our hearts..it does not take us much time to express our emotions provided we dropp our shyness or ego or anything that stops us.
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Beauty Philosophy 16 August 2009
Silent pains lead to rage and depression, it's better to express them in any way or another. Sport is one outlet, poetry is another. Both serve to release the pain and calm the beating heart... I invite you to read 'A poetess wrath', you'll see how a woman releases her pain and her rage. Good write.
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Engie Brown 16 June 2009
there are pains that are better kept sient, without knowing what it is, i feel the pain too.this is the best way it can be expressed, the massage is great!
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sky dreams 25 April 2009
There's a great message behind this poem.. i enjoyed reading it very much. great work!
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Rosalita Fernandez 05 March 2009
Nicely writen, nice to read. well done
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Laila lili 06 January 2009
WoW beautiful exepresion enhancing with honestly feeling and that is the main needing in the safe world with my best wishing Laila Lili
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Yaseen Anwer 12 December 2008
Very matured stroke by pen beautifully constructed keep going
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Anjali Sinha 18 October 2008
hazeem i can sense your silent pains it touched me a great deal thanks for sharing this lovely piece love anju
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Ashraful Musaddeq 13 September 2008
Intensive silent pain, well composed poem.
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