Blind Poem by Astha Tiwari

Blind

Rating: 4.5


You were just a shining drop on me,
making me forget everything.
I was drowning deep in you,
Forgetting myself.
That was my first stage of blidness.

Deeply you entered into my soul,
I became addicted of you.
My eyes always search you,
Finding the deep love inside.

That was my second stage of blidness.

I forgot everything what I'm;
it was only you crepting inside,
But I also forgot you are also a man,
And I deeply go into you.
I'm blind...! Ah! I'm blind...!

Wednesday, August 23, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: blindness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Binayakumar Mohanty 07 November 2017

You were just a shining drop on me ........................................................... And I am deeply go into you.Nice flow of feelings in a lucid style I enjoyed.Great start.Carry on dearAstha miles to go.Thanks

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Astha. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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