You were just a shining drop on me,
making me forget everything.
I was drowning deep in you,
Forgetting myself.
That was my first stage of blidness.
Deeply you entered into my soul,
I became addicted of you.
My eyes always search you,
Finding the deep love inside.
That was my second stage of blidness.
I forgot everything what I'm;
it was only you crepting inside,
But I also forgot you are also a man,
And I deeply go into you.
I'm blind...! Ah! I'm blind...!
A great start with a nice poem, Astha. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
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You were just a shining drop on me ........................................................... And I am deeply go into you.Nice flow of feelings in a lucid style I enjoyed.Great start.Carry on dearAstha miles to go.Thanks