Saturday, March 4, 2006

Blinding Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

Responsibility, a heavy load
ways me down, and makes me feel the pressure
action, words - politics all a code
and people's actions, all I must measure
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Jack Ashenden
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aeda sea 04 March 2006

being even younger than you, i realy feel the same way. this is awesome.

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***** ********* 04 March 2006

Yes Jack, there is an abundance of good and wonder out there too. Great poem, you are very talented. 10 from Tai

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