Pramita Bose

Rookie - 21 Points (Kolkata)

Blood - Poem by Pramita Bose

O blood! O blood! O blood!
Don't flow out! Don't flow out!
In battles, where you flow from many bodies
In accidents, where you will flow
Whether living or not, breathing or silent
But I pray...stop flowing
Like you have been stopped in Faustus by GOD
But pray... do not end like him
O blood! O blood! O blood!

Topic(s) of this poem: blood

Form: Didactic Poetry

Comments about Blood by Pramita Bose

  • Souren Mondal (2/3/2016 10:43:00 AM)

    There is no real limitations as such, just make sure that it doesn't sound too weird to the ear.. Trust your ears while writing a poem - say it loud to yourself, and you will find out what works and what doesn't :) (Report) Reply

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  • Soul Watcher (1/13/2016 12:37:00 AM)

    Good poem, but I agree actually with Souren.
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  • Souren Mondal (1/13/2016 12:16:00 AM)

    Interesting, but the the 'o blood' is just repeated too many times in my opinion.. The Faust reference was nice.. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    (1/13/2016 12:41:00 AM)

    Pls suggest the number of times it could have got repeated.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 12, 2016

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