Tuesday, July 28, 2009

Blood On The Floor Comments

Rating: 5.0

don't watch her in the act, its too dangerous to see.
your nightmares start to merge as the point touches her skin and gets dragged across gently.
the line of blood appears on her pale white wrist and drops to the floor.
with a second look you watch her fall to the ground, she lifts her chin for you to see the pain in her eyes while the tears race down her face.
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Alley Breines
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 29 July 2009

The gruesome and grilling moment of prematured insanity.Excellent piece Alley!

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