Angel of Darkness

Blood On The Wall

Fingers of ice
stroking smooth skin
grotesque actions
about to begin.

Fantasies of a twisted mind
become horrifying reality
lustful pleasures sought
perverted brutality.

Shackled and tortured
screams provoke sadistic smile
crimson pain
another innocent defiled.

Shame to much to bare
slowly raising a knife
out of body experience
she takes her own life.

Blood on the wall
into eternal slumber she sinks
final words written
scrolled in human ink.

'I don't want to live my life
scared of the things guys do
forgive me dad
as I forgive you'.

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 6, 2007
Poem Edited: Friday, April 22, 2011

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Comments about Blood On The Wall by Angel of Darkness

  • Zen Bojczuk (11/14/2007 10:50:00 AM)

    Powerful and chilling. The kind of poem that lingers long after it is read. Zen

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  • Saxyn Schaffer (11/12/2007 9:43:00 AM)

    very good poem i think
    its very well written and dark
    i like poetry like yours
    it tells you a story of how thiings are and why they are
    very good

    xxsaxynxx

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  • Barry Van Allen (11/10/2007 10:24:00 PM)

    A.O.D.,
    Sounds very wrong to me,
    especially, on who the knife was use on!

    B.V.A.

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  • Dee Daffodil (11/9/2007 10:35:00 AM)

    Angel...This poem is chilling! ! The ending catches the reader off guard... Excellent work! !
    Hugs,
    Dee

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