Blood Sky Poem by Viola Grey
Blood Sky
Red sky delight tonight,
as though the trees are ablaze,
shadows glowing with black.
Makes me think of your blood
dancing within your pale skin,
how I long to touch the fire
you emanate in every breath.
You are the beat, the steady pulse,
and I am just the breeze.
So, who is carrying who
towards tomorrow's destiny.
05/01/09
You are the beat, the steady pulse, and I am just the breeze. that is amazing.... I love this one... great job. Becca
Hi, Vi.... love the last two lines... they seem to apply and focus all the brooding beauty of what goes before! Impressive stuff. Tony
Good question to end with Viola - - and I liked the comparison made with blood - - this is an amazing write - - - 10 from Fay.
Your theme of fire blazed with imagery on my computer screen. A very vivid, passionate and perhaps a ravishing love ending. But that is the question? Excellent work. Karin Anderson
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
4/24/2024 2:16:07 AM # 1.0.0.1119
This poem makes me think of sunsets which are always so inspirational, keep your fire burning, the beat of your heart will deliver you unto destiny's day.