Blurry World Poem by Pratit Todkar

Blurry World

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I just saw it, the blurry world
With a lot of things
Without a lot of humans
A lot of them loved a lot of things
But none of them
Loved even one of them
It was a dreary world
Like a apocalypse
Tried to escape it and run from it
Fell down the abyss
And I realised,
I may have escaped it
As I woke up in my bed
The next day I realised
The real world is so similar
It made me think,
Whether I ever went
Down the road
In a blurry world?

Wednesday, August 21, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 26 May 2020

As I woke up in my bed The next day I realised The real world is so similar It made me think, Whether I ever went Down the road....dream and reality almost the same for you dear poet. a fine poem on humanity. tony

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Chinedu Dike 26 May 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. A witty philosophical reflection. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Pratit Todkar

Pratit Todkar

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India
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