Monday, January 5, 2015

Bon Courage Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why are the woods so alluring? A forest appears
to a young girl one morning as she combs
the dreams out of   her hair. The trees rustle
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Amy Gerstler
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Susan Williams 18 January 2016

Isn't this just lovely? ? ? ? - - a young girl one morning as she combs the dreams out of   her hair. Then she goes from that to this in 2 seconds flat- - - - She feels molecular, bedeviled, senses someone gently pulling her hair, tingles with kisses she won't receive for years. Three felled trees, a sort of chorus, narrate her thoughts, or rather channel theirs through her, or rather subject her to their peculiar verbal restlessness .. This lady has brains as well as charm.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 January 2016

A beautiful thought provoking poem and inspirational too. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2016

Inspiring poem.10........

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