When the time it
comes, to acknowledge
old age, the bitterness
will no longer enrage
...
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all rightly proportioned Lonliness is not to be ridiculed, its there for the marvelous ways these lines are really poetic, i enjoyed reading your poem, thanks for sharing, Brother, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments.
Old age and childhood share a number of similarities in the mindsets, anxiety and restlessness of mind of the two. Skillfully crafted poem with superb imagery. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 + points.