Monday, August 18, 2008

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Him and his slimey ego,
That I canno't bear,
His singing like a howling cat,
As he stands up there.
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Dyllan Martin
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I Am Charlie 14 June 2009

Singing like a howling cat? i think someone's let out my secret...smile. No worse words from a parents mouth than those... don't know if that apostrophey thing is meant to be there for 'cannot'. bit rickety rhythm for last phrase, maybe. Brill beginning and middle, however.

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Jessica Rose 09 September 2008

lol nice one. im guessing he hasnt realised he cannot sing? ugh somebody tape his mouuth shut!

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Dyllan Martin

Dyllan Martin

Bournmouth, England
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