Thursday, October 16, 2014

Breathing Dance Comments

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Breathing music gives a chance,
Whole body to rhythmical dance,
Dance abruptly stops with breath,
Then we dance with flowery wreath
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Geetha Jayakumar 17 October 2014

Wow...Fantastic poem in few lines.... I just loved the beautiful lines..... Dance abruptly stops with breath, Then we dance with flowery wreath

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Salini Nair 17 October 2014

beautiful rhythm i feel, .........................nice

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