Bricklayer Poem by Jared Carter

Bricklayer



I have laid them, one at a time,
in the bright days
Of summer: the dust of quicklime,
the subtle ways

The trowel shakes the mortar's cling
and dresses brick
After brick, making this one thing
emerge, this trick

Of patient labor now become
anonymous
And lasting, not designed for some
but all of us.

Sunday, May 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: creativity,labor,summer time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In this poem, as with all the other formal 12-line poems in the sequence with stanzas rhyming abab - called Alexandroids - it is understood that the 2nd and 4th lines of each stanza should properly be indented.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 22 May 2017

If only we could live in an edifice formed from the bricklayer's nurturing purposes, but unfortunately those are intangible. On our present-day earth many bricklayers build structures that stand uninhabited on the landscape, because economic winds positioned their hands for the benefit of a speculator. Before the building can fulfill its ostensible purpose (and many never do) , the speculator has already cashed in.

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