Britanica Hymn Revised Poem by Aldo Kraas

Britanica Hymn Revised



There are shadows in my dreams that I see
While I walk at night in the park in London riding my horse
But the shadows seen to follow me like a living ghost
Can I call this ghost the living ghost of London?
Or is somebody that is following me in the dark?

But don't try to ask me who it is
because I can't see very well in the dark
Also the only light that is available in the park here in London
comes From the moon in the sky
But the moon is doing a good job to guide me
where I need to go from Point a to point b here in the park at London

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 10 July 2014

I think the poet needs a lesson on the definitions of editing and revision........

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Aldo Kraas

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