Wednesday, April 29, 2015

Broken Comments

Rating: 4.5

If wings were words
born to fly,
one would wonder:
could poems fill the deep blue sky?
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Smoky Hoss
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Phyllis Strong 04 May 2015

“Great poems seldom make it to the page; ” I’ve had poems like that; the words came so fast I couldn’t write them down. So I guess it was just a poem to me, from God. Be Blessed!

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Dee Corpolongo 02 May 2015

I truly enjoyed this poem, esp. the second verse, and can easily relate to what you are saying. Hopefully, you will continue to write your poems, and I will keep on reading them. Thanks my friend.

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Dee Corpolongo 02 May 2015

I really liked this poem, esp. the second verse, and definitely can relate to what you are trying to say. You always have such a way with words, and express your feelings with passion. Very enjoyable my friend and keep writing.

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