'Broken But Not Dead' Poem by mike clarke

'Broken But Not Dead'

Rating: 5.0


Used then thrown away,
like a broken toy, that cant be played with,
'once loved'
but the game has changed.
Yesterday was yesterday,
today is today, tomorrow will never be the same.
The tortured soul, remains of a broken home,
thats been sold.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
L.P. Alexanders 17 June 2009

Yesterday was yesterday, today is today, tomorrow will never be the same. -very true The tortured soul, remains of a broken home, i think that the toy symbolizes a child that suffered some kind of abuse at home due to a broken home and his innocence has been sold. But, he was able to overcome that suffering and face life and here is the meaning of the title great poem 10+ keep up the good work

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 June 2009

The tortured soul, remains of a broken home, thats been sold..............................superb imagery, the very art of creating the beauty from void v, wonderful phrasing, yet ingenious that attracts reader`s attention by the muse,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 June 2009

A tragedy beckons a fixing. Once broken, you got to pay for the cost.A broken home is like a drifter straying far from its destination.Its a kinda internal bleeding.You bleed............and bleed but still alive.The mother of all pains! !

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Lady Black Rose 10 June 2009

wow that was deep... plz put more poems on here, i will luv to more of them! ! ! keep it up evil bunbun

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mike clarke

newport, wales
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