Broken Friendship Poem by Liz Gellur

Broken Friendship

Rating: 5.0


One talk
Turned into shouting
We can't agree
On one thing

I wanted to repair it
But now I know
Theres no point of everything
Because our friendship is now very low

I wanted to know if our friendship really mattered
Then I saw you all walk into different direction
Then I saw our friendship
Suddenly shatter into zillions

All I wanted to do is to repair it
But now i know
None of you really want it

I guess our friendship
Can't really last forever
There's no such thing as
'It really matters'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malini Kadir 17 December 2007

NIce read Liezelle......nice friends are also human and perhaps hurt more as theyexpect more of you......have higher hopes... Time heals all wounds....Cheers!

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Thad Wilk 15 December 2007

Nice write Liezelle! A real friend will not walk out, they stay through thick and thin! best regards: Thad *10*! !

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Rinalyn Bonajos 01 December 2017

I guess our friendship Can't really last forever There's no such thing as 'It really matters' But Friendship for me matter... I like your poem! Keep it up!

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Mackie Figueroa 14 December 2009

yeah, Right! friendship appears when they need you and if not, they won't. what a mess! : -(

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Jo Matibag 21 February 2008

it relly fits me, , .. my friends and i are now enemies try reading my poems, .... most of them are about broken friendship

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Mary G 17 February 2008

i like your poembut i also have a quote for you about friend ship 'You cannot say you've lost a friendship. If a friendship is capable of ending, it is because it never existed.'

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Hoda Eldeeb 18 December 2007

its true no one relly cares but thats life and thats that

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