Broken Heart Poem by kente lucy

Broken Heart

Rating: 5.0


It happened to me once again
I have been rejected, abused
used and damped.

Been left with a bleeding
broken, wounded heart.
Am left in remorse,
in a river of tears that's going to
drown me, and a swollen heart
that's going to burst.

My face is sullen, my soul empty
my knees feeble unable
to defend me from the glaring cruelty.

Why such cruelty, why such harshness
am left all alone, lonely and forgotten,
no happiness, no fulfillment
but only a lonely, broken heart.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 29 June 2011

Wow! Very impressive the way you describe your inner-pain! I know it takes great courage to finally open up and tell the whole world of your touching experience! Thank for sharing! I had similar experience in my turbulent past and wrote two particular poems titled: A BROKEN HEART (Like yours) and IN PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS which I hope you can read and enjoy if time permits. For your wonderful write I give you 10+++ Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! ...

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 04 January 2010

True and very cutting. You write so well about pain it is amazing. 10+++ (You might want to view my poem 'Hear Lies the Heart' and 'After You Leave' these realte well to the sentiment here. Welcome to the Club! -of Broken Hearts, that is.)

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Seema Gupta 24 September 2009

i have been rejected, abused 'very painful to read this line, ya really heartfelt' regards

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