Tuesday, September 15, 2015

Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 4.5

My heart sinking…
While my mind robbing graves..
Tears streaming down my cheeks
I don’t hear your voice..
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Deepa Chandran
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Chinedu Dike 23 September 2015

The poem reminded me of Humpty Dumpty's great fall. A good depiction of heartbreak, well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Deepa. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Deepa Chandran 21 October 2015

Thanks Chinedu..

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