wendi Collier

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Broken Heart 3 - Poem by wendi Collier

Broken heart
I cry only at night because I don’t want you to know I hurt
I try and I try to get you out of my mind but nothing ever works
I try to replace you but it only makes things worse
We broke up over something stupid
Now I try to stay muted
Because I know if I say the wrong thing
It will change every thing
My heart is broken
I’m really hurting
And I don’t know what to do
My friends tell me to talk to you
But every time I go to I feel like you don’t want to
Maybe when this is all over
We will get back together
But for now I guess I just have to suffer

Comments about Broken Heart 3 by wendi Collier

  • (10/27/2009 1:46:00 PM)

    I am glad i read this one. good poem hun! (Report) Reply

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  • Shekhar Joshi (5/28/2009 12:39:00 PM)

    ok so seems like u r waiting for it to get over....and how will that happen...
    listen it can happen onlt when u both talk..no other way.

    good luck

    a sad poem but written well
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  • (5/27/2009 10:05:00 AM)

    sad but well written good job (Report) Reply

  • (4/6/2009 8:55:00 AM)

    hurting to read such painful poem..... suffering is the sugar of life..... keep writing such sweet poems.... (Report) Reply

  • (3/12/2009 4:12:00 PM)

    Interesting in touch with your feelings yes you are.
    You are hurting yes you are.
    You are mature yes you are.
    All I have to say is I hope the best for you finding the one.
    I also love this poem.
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  • (2/2/2009 5:34:00 PM)

    your poems are good, thats sad and sucks to go threw (Report) Reply

  • (1/14/2009 9:17:00 PM)

    Wow! ! ! I love it! ! ! Amazing... (Report) Reply

  • (1/14/2009 12:34:00 PM)

    i enjoyed it, very in touch with ur emotions, good job (Report) Reply

  • (1/9/2009 7:03:00 PM)

    Wendi, this is great. Filled with passion, honesty and many things we all recognize and share with you. Yes, we all had 'beginnings' and 'endings', but lots of life left to go and many more hills to climb. May you find your special one. Don't be in a hurry. Get to know yourself first and the space next to you should fill and compliment you nicely ere long, yes? My best, Carol (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 9, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 11, 2009

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