Broken Heart Comments

To make me dumb Screaming my guts out - - - - - The two lines do not fit in there; the poem evolves well, like a part of an ancient tragedy. So the lines could be transformed to: To make me numb (twice, yes) Screaming my voice out (odd but better)

this poem says everything ive always felt but was to afraid to say it myself this is on of the best poems ive seen so far thank u for writing it keep writing poems like this and youll probably be well known and famous truly melissa broomhead

These are the universal words of heart break. Its a strange organ, the heart, unlike anything else, the more you break it, the stronger it gets. Great poem...