Broken Promise Poem by Ray Hansell

Broken Promise



My hearts in a sling
It can longer sing
Why did I cling
To that stupid ring


9-18-18/RjH

Tuesday, September 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 18 September 2018

The faithful and true cling to the ring Until it becomes an impossible thing To keep a commitment intended for two When the only committed one, seems to be you! Please consider reading my poem 'Moving On'. Although fictitious, it's a woman's version of what you wrote here.

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