Broken_Up Poem by LeighAnna Williams

Broken_Up

Rating: 5.0


Broken_up i gave up
trying to scream to save
what never would have lasted
where you stood was obvious i made
my mistakes and i didn't hold on for too long
i ran and kept a distance to keep the chain...
broken_up running frantically searching for you
but where are you?
here i go honestly you saw right through
me i see for us to end
your life could begin your words like
treasures that kept me searching for more
i left so many things of value far behind too late for
recommission plumitting straight into the deep end i
fall deeper longer farther
dreaming that you've gone
lost in the sea of lies
guilt comsumes
me and it
digs right in
so much for that happy ending
you made it clear
only one way out now
no place to call home here i go
broken-up trying not to hesitate to
kill this agony and sorrow
slipping into sleep i lie thinking of you
tears drowning me like one time before
haunt my dreams and one day i'll die
knowing you weren't the reason
why did you have to leave me...
BROKEN_UP

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Hendrickson 21 June 2009

another great piece. filled with passion and emotion. i loved it

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Danny H 20 June 2009

this was beautiful: i love the raw pain as you flip from being in control to falling apart

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