Sunday, June 5, 2011

Broken Wings Comments

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I sang to you just like a dove
and wrapped you in my wings of love

now i cant lift off and take flight
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ash enslow
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This is absolutely beautiful! The word choice is perfect and the mood is consistent throughout the poem, which is hard to do. Great job! ~Monica

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