Friday, February 12, 2016

Brokenhearted Comments

Rating: 4.8

Why did you break my heart, when you knew it was broken before?
You stepped into my life and like a fool I smiled and danced
I rolled out the red carpet welcome mat leading to my heart
And what did you do, but leave your muddy, soiled feet all over it
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Smyrna Brewley
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Swimming in the sea of sadness yet seens of success secured from the very.lessons learnt. Well donemy friend!

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Chinedu Dike 17 March 2016

An insightful depiction of disappointment, deceit, and distress occasioned by exit of love, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart with conviction. A good portrayal of courageous heart going through heartbreak. Thanks for sharing Smyrna. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

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Lyn Paul 12 February 2016

Powerful last lines. Do not search for love, just Enjoy life! Love will come to you.

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