Buffet Treat (Senryu) Poem by Leonard Dabydeen

Buffet Treat (Senryu)

Rating: 5.0


Slice of tender love
warm Chinese acupuncture
steak of happiness.

Watch you brim with smile
ready to massage a meal
cutlery bare hands.

Tuesday, July 5, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 July 2011

Wonderful poem written with great skill. The poem is rich in imagery and style. I am impressed. Well taken. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'An advice' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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