Friday, April 1, 2011

Burn One Half Of All You Write Comments

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Slicky-slick lines and capitalization
Won't win our adoration,
And restating old facts, time after time-
Just reading; we have lost a dime.
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Patti Masterman
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Sandra Martyres 12 April 2011

This is my third attempt at commenting on this brilliant poem...Great advice for many....perhaps me too

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Manolo Del Toro 01 April 2011

You know I did read this yesterday also, whats the deal?

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Vlad Alucard 01 April 2011

Didn't I read this yesterday, maybe it's good advice to heed, But it seems Aldo Krassnish.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 April 2011

Yes, that's what I wanted to say that instead of sticking to old and obsolete themes, we should try something new. Very good observation. A thought provoking write indeed. Thanks for sharing...

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