Burn Or Shine (1) Poem by Amiegbereta Edwin

Burn Or Shine (1)

Rating: 4.5


From a drop of water, then flesh
He cries, lay down, sits, crawl and walk.
Emotions sets in, he chooses to read, love and play.
His choices either creates a blessing or a thorn.
Either way he chooses to thrive.
And at the end, his choice sets him
on an eternal home; burn or shine.
And now we both stand there
Yea we are standing there
There where we have to make that choice.
Have you made yours already?
Check, will you burn or shine?

Tuesday, December 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: fate
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernest Makuakua 20 January 2016

Have you made yours already? Check, will you burn or shine? i will shine for the brighter it gets the better thanks for sharing

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Ernest Makuakua 20 January 2016

Have you made yours already? Check, will you burn or shine? well my choice is to shine for the brighter it becomes the better BEAUTIFUL PIECE THANKS FOR SHARING Like the way you think and put your words

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Roseann Shawiak 19 January 2016

Very interesting side of making choices, thought provoking at it's best! Definitely wouldn't like to burn, only shine. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Amiegbereta Edwin 20 January 2016

Thanks

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Gajanan Mishra 29 December 2015

burn or shine, good one, thanks..

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