Hmm....never heard of Burnaby Lake but I'm a huge lake lover. This could have been a lovely poem if you had continued with it's theme. Beautiful imagery can be created when writing poetry of lakes and oceans. Disappointed you didn't take this piece as far as it could go.
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Hmm....never heard of Burnaby Lake but I'm a huge lake lover. This could have been a lovely poem if you had continued with it's theme. Beautiful imagery can be created when writing poetry of lakes and oceans. Disappointed you didn't take this piece as far as it could go.