Burning Poem by Brooke Peterson

Burning

Rating: 5.0


Burning, Rushing
Beating, Baiting.

Loving, Wanting
Yearning, Fading.

Hurting, Learning
Killing, Waiting.

Sobbing, Mourning-
-Mistake worth making-

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stella Andrews 20 October 2009

i love that. each word is like, , ahh! ! :) hah very goood x stella

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Katie Bradley 05 September 2009

Who knew that words can be so powerful. Very well written.

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Milica Franchi De Luri 20 August 2009

This is very nice.......... I like this type of poems, If time permits read my poem 'Free to be me' or 'Man'.

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