this feelin
is like a pain
like my heart had burst in to flames
my heart is burning with love
for this girl from the heavens above
but i dont know did i fell in love
that girl made heat
when she walk past me
with nice & slow feet
listen to me
my heart still got the heat
but my love is from my burninig heart
that where it had all started
The burning desire that sparks the burning heart to a standstill.You're in the ring of fire now Demarcus.
raw emotions fill the page from a heart burning for love. absolutely wonderful, hun.
Very good, sounds straight from the heart, need to work on rhyming though, using the same word over and over gets repiticious and leaves the average reader feeling bored, but overall, very good
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautiful poem..... from the heart :) could u read my poems and comment, there arent many yet...: /