Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun


~burnt Revisited~ - Poem by Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun

So much stronger,
piercing through and in...
Deeper no longer sensing
as I feel it all begin.

Chared memories of yesterday
linger on the winds,
Carry these ashes higher
as we always show our sins.

Roots grow ever-deeper
but weaken from their way through,
Grasping onto nothing
still nothing will have to do.

My soul's among the many
as dead as dead can be,
Under this opened sky
no tears will fall from me.

Entrail all shortcomings
behind a false half-smile,
I leave behind my rainbow
which fades in no short while.

2005

fictional


Comments about ~burnt Revisited~ by Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun

  • (12/3/2005 8:22:00 AM)

    This is so beautifully crafted it is almost self-contradictory. A very cherishable work. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/19/2005 9:48:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Bill and David. I wish I could be given an email when someone comments on my poetry, so that I could reply quicker. I appreciate your comments very much :) Kim :) (Report)Reply

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  • (11/19/2005 6:16:00 AM)

    yeah liked this, good one (Report)Reply

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  • (11/19/2005 1:05:00 AM)

    like the poem........................................ (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 19, 2005

Poem Edited: Friday, October 26, 2007


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