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~burnt Revisited~

So much stronger,
piercing through and in...
Deeper no longer sensing
as I feel it all begin.

Chared memories of yesterday
linger on the winds,
Carry these ashes higher
as we always show our sins.

Roots grow ever-deeper
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Tears In Rain 03 December 2005

This is so beautifully crafted it is almost self-contradictory. A very cherishable work.

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Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun 19 November 2005

Thank you so much Bill and David. I wish I could be given an email when someone comments on my poetry, so that I could reply quicker. I appreciate your comments very much :) Kim :)

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Bill Smith 19 November 2005

yeah liked this, good one

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David Gerardino 19 November 2005

like the poem........................................

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