But It Did Poem by Dónall Dempsey

But It Did

Rating: 2.2


You live on the edge of the map
just off of
you know the place
(where we said we'd always be)

friends
and meet up every now and then to
but we...didn't.

Yoou live on the edge of where
the map runs out
just like
our love did

although we always said it wouldn't
(couldn't?)
but it
...did.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lauren Watkins 21 October 2007

I think the simplicity of this poem is what makes it work so well. Lovely. Lauren

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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