butterfly, butterflyfly in the skybutterfly, butterflyflies so highbutterfly, butterflylands on my thighbutterfly, butterflymotionlessly liesbutterfly, butterflygracefully dies
The poem is very gd.Can you give a rhythm too..
What a good poem
This is so beautiful
Loved this poem about the butterfly. I love butterflies.
Check out my poem BUTTERFLY OF DEATH.
I think that this poem is lively
i think this poem shows a lot of emotion considering how simple and short it is. i really like it.
i think this poem is lovely
except for the fly part
maybe you should substitute it with FLY with flutter.
beautiful I love butterflies
Very Good. I love it
what a marvellous thing... well done..
I like this. Very Good Job
Umm, this is depressing, but a decent poem, Lot of Love'
It's so simple yet so sad. I really enjoy it.
This poem is really sad, but i love it. I think this should be published.
nice poem, its short and sweet.tru though.
its just, amazing. its so great. its lovely.
kinda nice, nice ideas.
I'm sure your other poems are even better =P
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem »