Saturday, October 13, 2018

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Fig leaf was all there was in times of yore,
Precarious, and held in place by hand
In Eden Garden as goes ancient lore,
Adam and Eve, sole two souls in all land.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 October 2018

An excellent write! The last two lines carry precise message! (10)

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 October 2018

So nice of you, I just revised the poem, Dr Swain.

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