By Behavior Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

By Behavior

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What can be real face?
Is that what we try to find out in case?
The innocence can not be pretended
The real issue can not be attended

In real life we can not adopt double standard
As it may not take you little forward
It may push you back
Whole structure or ambition will be at stake

That is why we talk so much of life
We even compare it to an edge of knife
That leaves little space for us to maneuver
When you regain confidence, the life is over

So it is worthless to fight
Over the issues that are not right
It demands some thinking
Before real ship is sinking

I would love to shed
And really led
By honest behavior
To attain the honor

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What can be real face? Is that what we try to find out in case?

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Nice poem! Facts....well described! Padmavathi, Secunderabad May 15,2014

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Re: By behavior (Score: 1) by b.b.w.(Tulsa) on Wednesday, May 14,2014 (22: 07: 53) I enjoyed your poem. It's good to keep in mind that there are true rhymes and half (or inexact) rhymes. Also, rhyme schemes can be irregular. Experienced poets sometimes alternate true rhymes and half rhymes and use irregularity for effect. To call this schizo shows ignorance of poetic devices. Keep up the good work. Reply to This | Parent | Delete Re: By behavior (Score: 1) by jadia4708au on Thursday, May 15,2014 (07: 49: 10) so encouraging words sir. Poets need to reform n say what his soul really wants to convey instead of keeping confined to rhymes or no rhymes.

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Nice poem with a pertinent message. Thaanks for sharing, Hasmukhji. Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India May 15,2014

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Re: By behavior (Score: 1) by zbird on Wednesday, May 14,2014 (18: 56: 23) the rhyming scheme keeps getting lost..it rhymes and then it doesn't and then it does and then it doesn't... a bit schizo... choose one style and stick to it for each poem Reply to This | Parent | Delete Re: By behavior (Score: 1) by jadia4708au on Wednesday, May 14,2014 (21: 26: 53) it is unique style.12,34. enjoy poetry. welcome n thanks

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Post Lovely work Olwen Cuttita9 hours ago Well done. Many take amiss of what really matters and focus on only the little things that don't really compare or stand up to other matters. This is said and written very well. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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