By The Sea,2 Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

By The Sea,2



with a bucket and a spade,
i hit the wide open beach,
like a tourist half dressed,
i lay my towl down, and put
on my cool black shades,
with some music, and my
hair thrown back, im ready
for any thing, except love...
like the sun going down,
i pack my stuff and leave..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raynette Eitel 07 August 2005

David, I've read this several times. I'm confused by the line I'm ready for anything (comma) except love. like the sun going down. Why don't I get it? I can see your saying 'I'm ready for anything except the sun going down...but perhaps you need another line to explain...Did love scare you off? Surely not! Raynette

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