Bye Poem by Ray Hansell

Bye



The gun is pressed
To my head
Soon I'll no longer
Be depressed

With one little pull
With one loud pop
All the hurt and pain
Is finally going to stop

Sorry for the mess
That I leave behind
I hope the clean up
Doesn't take much time

To who ever finds me
Dead and laying here
I hope your future nights
Aren't filled with bad nightmares


5-27-10/RJH

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Davis 27 May 2010

Hi- As a suicide poem, this is pretty good. But the fact that the narrator has all this to say shows that he should be sayin' stuff not slayin' stuff.

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