C2h5oh As Medicine Poem by Julia Iwanetzki

C2h5oh As Medicine

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Cries of your deepest divinely destructed desires
Curling up inside your witheringly weeping womb
Hapless victim of soul shattering self-hatred
Heartstrings cut apart by a gory god given past
Honed the shards inside your guiltily greedy gut
Hedonism a new-found health hungry heaven
Histrionic blaring cries for rapid rescue
Oblivious to your self-medicated malign misery
Havoc created, tormenting others obnoxiously

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T.R. James Bray 10 April 2022

I like the flow of this one! Nice work!

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Wow! This is striking. Addiction especially to alcohol is horrible. You have represented it's horrendous effects with mastery. Loved it. And I thought you were a student of physics. No, you are a master in chemistry. Or medicine? 😊

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