~callous 1~ Poem by Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun

~callous 1~



Void in entirety,
Masked intent...unworthy
Hidden yet shown
by marked callousness.

Complete detachment
is control
Stumbling,
grasping hold,
of
nothing...

For control comes first
as care,
Releasing while stripping
bare.

2005

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tears In Rain 03 December 2005

This is an intriguing creation. It appears you have achieved three wholly different styles revolving around the same subject. each has their own merits, but I am enthralled mostly with Callous II.

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