Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun

~rain Dance~

Flowers lay waiting in sunlight's palest beam
a rainbow's their forever fading dream,
Night clouds covet as shadows gather near
amidst darkness stormy skies seem clear.

Breaking states of discrepancy
the wind is calm but there's no certainty,
Hear thundered echoes of distant lands
tumbled words thoughts can't comprehend.

Lay and long for dreams to bloom
awake my mind for a shower soon,
Storm's calling sings on summer winds
to quickly hush and reminisce again.

This showered dance still ends the same
no need to cry when you have the rain.

Poem Submitted: Monday, July 2, 2007
Poem Edited: Friday, March 18, 2011

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  • RyuOh Kenshin (7/2/2007 10:34:00 PM)

    very imaginative and very beautiful poem

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  • William Jackson (7/2/2007 10:13:00 PM)

    Good form! Lovely poem. Creative end.

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  • William Jackson (7/2/2007 10:13:00 PM)

    Good form! Lovely poem. Creative end.

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