Calm Sea Like Me Poem by laxmi nagar

Calm Sea Like Me

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You have a lot to say in behind your calm expression/
You are not so/
You are getting prepared for showing your actual strength/
Each wave is getting prepared to face the change/

There is something unique I can see/
Uncountable waves are losing their existence in this wave less sea/
High tides, storms, sun rays, my footsteps/
Can't they be enough to break this silence/

Having pearls, treasure of aquatic life, happily moving waves/
What makes the sea calm/
Blank about the emotions, yet understand the pain of being alone/
I understand the pain of this blue water/

Tuesday, May 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: pearls,sea,storms,strength
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 29 May 2018

Well thought out and elegantly penned with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Laxmi and do remain enriched.

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Rini Shibu 29 May 2018

Beautiful poem about the calm waves of sea..welcome to poem hunter

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Rajnish Manga 29 May 2018

An idea nicely articulated. When perfectly attuned, one can relate to nature and communicate with it. This poetic marvel shows enormous promise. Thanks and welcome to this Forum, Dear Poet. High tides, storms, sun rays, my footsteps Can't they be enough to break this silence What makes the sea calm..... pain of being alone

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Laxmi Nagar 29 May 2018

Thank You!

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