Can'T You See That All My Castles In The Sky Are Burning Poem by Aldo Kraas

Can'T You See That All My Castles In The Sky Are Burning



Can't you see that all my castles in the sky are burning
Out of control?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 14 July 2014

Great vivid descriptions! I have to wonder though what is causing these magnificent castles of yours to burn? This could have been a spectacular poem if you had continued on in this vein.........

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* Sunprincess * 30 June 2014

..........amazing imagery in this write......you must hang onto those dreams......

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Aldo Kraas

Aldo Kraas

Sao Paulo Brazil
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