Can We Describe Poem by MAHAVIR TRIVEDI

Can We Describe

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Sun rise and sets;
we listen the word development
But at times we confuse
Whose development human or machine.

Strength is going down
weakness is forward to next
we dont have time to even listen our own text
can we describe in which world we are existing

when we walk up we are tired and when we sleep at night we are tired
Then when we get time to realize our freshness
Everyone run behind the money and loses their strength
no one go behind freshness to get ample amount of happiness

can we describe this world
were numbers of people dies without any diseases
Our forefather never think of tomorrow what is going to be happen
And now we people only think about whether we are there tomorrow or not.

just live a life today only
my question is where is those day, where we not know what is today or what is tomorrow

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
we people actually diverted from our real path were we dont know that what is right and what is wrong just we jump even without knowing its depth or not
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 30 September 2017

A very fine creation..Thank you fro sharing!

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Mahavir Trivedi 01 October 2017

Thank you sir, for your valuable comment

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Jazib Kamalvi 26 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Mahavir. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Mahavir Trivedi 27 September 2017

Thank you sir and i will definitely read your poem

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Rajnish Manga 25 September 2017

Welcome to this Forum, Mahavir. This is a lovely poem with a philosophical touch. The poem needs to be edited e.g. four father (forefathers) . Thanks a lot.

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Mahavir Trivedi 26 September 2017

oh thank you so much sir, for guiding me

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