Can You Sense The Sarcasm Poem by Madeline Fazio

Can You Sense The Sarcasm



I love that feeling
When you are sitting down
Reading, or typing on the computer
And your get so heavy that you
try and read with them half closed
Finally surrendering to the fact
that you can no longer stay awake

So you go to lay in your comfortable bed
Hopeful of the dreams you with to have
And then as soon as you head hits
the soft pillow

Your eyes don't feel so heavy anymore
And now you can't fall asleep

God how I love that feeling

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adriana Cruz 03 October 2005

hmm interesting feeling. seems like youre missing the word 'eyes' in the first stanza and i think you meant 'wish' in the second one.

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