Brandi Young

Rookie (06-01-89 / New Jersey)

Can You? - Poem by Brandi Young

Lying in bed
Pained by not knowing
Body aching
Head spinning

Can you help me?
Or am i going to have to just deal
Not knowing how you are
Is putting a knife in my chest

Please help me find a way to fix this
Can you fix my broken heart?
You've done it before i know you can do it again
Won't you please

If you won't
Can you find a way
To put my tortured heart to rest?
Cause you're the only one that could do it

(9-22-05)


Comments about Can You? by Brandi Young

  • (2/11/2006 3:12:00 PM)


    Ah a broken heart, so painful, so crushing, empty. I hope it's filling with love once more for you Brandi. Moyaxx (Report) Reply

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  • (1/16/2006 7:49:00 PM)


    There are few greater horrors than the silence of a lover. Time, patience, and faith are the only treatments for a broken heart. Hang in there Ms. Young. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2006



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